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G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:20 pm
by EmberSparks
"W-What is this?!" Hikaru exclaimed, turning around and putting his right hand to the left side of his chest in the G.R.A.V.E salute.
Something close to an emotion slithered across Chobbi's face, but in a moment it was gone. The G.R.A.V.E legend strode over next to where Hikaru was standing and kneeled on his feet in respect to Kite. Kite chuckled. "At ease!" he said, turning his back to Chobbi and walking off absently.
"Sir!" cried Hikaru enthusiastically as he removed his hand from its position. Chobbi did not say anything and stood up, face still void of emotion. With an air of superiority, he brushed a stray bang of hair from his face and turned to Hikaru.
"Mission details. You are to train with me at Sleepywood for one month to learn some new skills. After adequate training, I will accompany you to get your fourth job." Chobbi blinked for a moment as he tried to remember anything that he'd missed out. "Oh, and one more thing - after the training, depending on your performance, you might be promoted to Crescent Unit. Any-"
Unfortunately, anything that Chobbi said after that sentence was drowned out by the excited yells of Hikaru. "Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah..." he grinned, punching the air in overwhelming happiness. "Thank you, Lord Ikutsuki!"
Chobbi turned to Kite and sighed. "I have to train this young whelp to the point that he can actually join Crescent Unit? I hope that your intuitions are correct, milord."
Kite merely smiled in reply. "Now, now, don't get so happy - the training will be harsh, and you will have to either capture or kill Draco in order to be promoted." Hikaru stopped cheering abruptly, staring at Kite in curiosity. Chobbi shrugged before taking a cookie out of his pocket and eating it.
"Now," began Kite in a serious tone. "The airship is waiting outside. Are you ready?"
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:33 pm
by pvtsharp
Cool, this will be fun.
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:36 pm
by EmberSparks
pvtsharp wrote:Cool, this will be fun.
More stuff is coming...
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 10:59 pm
by chobbilight
EmberSparks wrote:Kite merely smiled in reply. "Now, now, don't get so happy - the training will be harsh, and you will have to either capture or kill Draco in order to be promoted." Hikaru stopped cheering abruptly, staring at Kite in curiosity. Chobbi shrugged before taking a cookie out of his pocket and eating it.
thats more like it
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:30 am
by EmberSparks
chobbilight wrote:EmberSparks wrote:Kite merely smiled in reply. "Now, now, don't get so happy - the training will be harsh, and you will have to either capture or kill Draco in order to be promoted." Hikaru stopped cheering abruptly, staring at Kite in curiosity. Chobbi shrugged before taking a cookie out of his pocket and eating it.
thats more like it
You'll be eating cookies throughout the whole fic.
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 5:11 pm
by chobbilight
EmberSparks wrote:chobbilight wrote:EmberSparks wrote:Kite merely smiled in reply. "Now, now, don't get so happy - the training will be harsh, and you will have to either capture or kill Draco in order to be promoted." Hikaru stopped cheering abruptly, staring at Kite in curiosity. Chobbi shrugged before taking a cookie out of his pocket and eating it.
thats more like it
You'll be eating cookies throughout the whole fic.
lol win
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:20 am
by Berkster
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:15 pm
by EmberSparks
What about a cookie-flavoured condom >:(
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:05 pm
by chobbilight
EmberSparks wrote:What about a cookie-flavoured condom >:(
.....i use the condoms but i dont taste them
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:29 pm
by EmberSparks
chobbilight wrote:EmberSparks wrote:What about a cookie-flavoured condom >:(
.....i use the condoms but i dont taste them
I saw a Durex condom called an Ultima at a supermarket in Singapore.
Ultima is a spell in Final Fantasy. PLAGIARISM!
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2010 7:36 am
by pvtsharp
EmberSparks wrote:I saw a Durex condom called an Ultima at a supermarket in Singapore.
Ultima is a spell in Final Fantasy. PLAGIARISM!
PARADOX!
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:22 pm
by Zaylo
EmberSparks wrote:I saw a Durex condom called an Ultima at a supermarket in Singapore.
Ultima is a spell in Final Fantasy. PLAGIARISM!
Actually thats wrong.
Final Fantasy is the thing copyrighted not the spells.
If you think about it, Fire is also a spell yet were not calling plagiarism on anything with fire in the title are we?
Also spend more time on your story, chapters shouldn't be divided into parts especially since yours are very small
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 11:25 pm
by chobbilight
Zaylo wrote:EmberSparks wrote:I saw a Durex condom called an Ultima at a supermarket in Singapore.
Ultima is a spell in Final Fantasy. PLAGIARISM!
Actually thats wrong.
Final Fantasy is the thing copyrighted not the spells.
If you think about it, Fire is also a spell yet were not calling plagiarism on anything with fire in the title are we?
Also spend more time on your story, chapters shouldn't be divided into parts especially
since yours are very small
lol
hes talking about your wee-wee
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:37 am
by EmberSparks
chobbilight wrote:Zaylo wrote:EmberSparks wrote:I saw a Durex condom called an Ultima at a supermarket in Singapore.
Ultima is a spell in Final Fantasy. PLAGIARISM!
Actually thats wrong.
Final Fantasy is the thing copyrighted not the spells.
If you think about it, Fire is also a spell yet were not calling plagiarism on anything with fire in the title are we?
Also spend more time on your story, chapters shouldn't be divided into parts especially
since yours are very small
lol
hes talking about your wee-wee
F**k you.
And Megaman, I was being sarcastic.
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 10:14 pm
by chobbilight
ember, srry i dont have any interest in men
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:37 am
by EmberSparks
chobbilight wrote:ember, srry i dont have any interest in men
You and your sarcasm...
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:02 am
by playa4life01
chobbilight wrote:Zaylo wrote:EmberSparks wrote:I saw a Durex condom called an Ultima at a supermarket in Singapore.
Ultima is a spell in Final Fantasy. PLAGIARISM!
Actually thats wrong.
Final Fantasy is the thing copyrighted not the spells.
If you think about it, Fire is also a spell yet were not calling plagiarism on anything with fire in the title are we?
Also spend more time on your story, chapters shouldn't be divided into parts especially
since yours are very small
lol
hes talking about your wee-wee
HAHAHAHHAHA !!!!
i wanted to say that xP
Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 4 Pt 2
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2012 2:21 am
by thlmobile
Haha wow. To be honest I hate it. I can do so much better. but thanks anyway
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