No.14 Chapter 1

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No.14 Chapter 1

Postby stng75 » Thu May 13, 2010 7:36 am

It is...bright. I can see this...light.
This is the first time I've seen the light.
I can see shadows, talking to each other...
Their voices are so faint.. I can't make out any words...
First things first. Where am I? Who am I?
Oh no, the darkness... It's coming back...
My eyes feel so heavy... Can't keep the darkness away...

I awoke much later, the two shadows were gone. There was a man in front of me, looking down at some object. Everytime he touched it, the object made a 'click' sound.

"This can't be right...," the man said frantically ", this is impossible!"

I reached out to touch the man, but my arms, so heavy, were stopped by something, I don't know, invisible.
The man heard the sound I made when I touched the invisible wall and looked at me, and his eyes suddenly widened. He then took something from his pocket.

"Come here quickly!!" he yelled into it.

I only thought how foolish he looked, yelling at an inanimate object, as if it could respond. How absurd.
Suddenly a woman in a long, white jacket came and asked what was the matter. The man pointed to me and she covered her mouth with her hand.

"How can this... But this is not...," she mumbled to herself, then turned to the man and exclaimed ", let him out!"
"But that could be-"
"I don't care, let him out!"

The man, startled, turned to the device in front of him and made another 'click' sound. I heard a noise from all around me, and I thought I saw the invisible wall move away. I moved towards the man and woman, but my feet gave away, and I fell with a thud, embarassed.
The man and woman came and picked me up saying 'easy now' and 'be gentle.'

"Are you ok?" asked the woman.

I looked at her and opened my mouth to speak, but no words would come to me.

"He can't speak," the man said ", we should just dispose of him!"
"A newborn baby can not speak, yet we do not dispose of it's precious life." the woman seemed to be defending me.
"He is at least a 16 year progress, he should know how to speak, besides, the computer shows that he can think just like any one of us, the exact words we say right now can be thought up of in his head!" the man exclaimed.

Even though they were talking about me, they had forgotten to help me up. So as I tried to get up, I yet again fell with another thud, and they both looked at me.

The woman crossed her arms and sighed ", He will be my responsibilty."

The man became furious, but left the room. The woman helped me stand.

"Well then," she said ", let us go No.14..."

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I know I'm kinda messed up with my fan fics since I haven't even gotten past chapter 1, but I will try my hardest to complete this 1
I promise
and also I will most likely NOT use any of my friends here on mapleanime in this fan fic
Ty

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby jadeylady96 » Sun May 16, 2010 4:36 pm

Ahhhhh Awesome! :O (MS3)

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby EmberSparks » Tue May 18, 2010 1:12 am

Nice~ But what happened to GUARD? o.0

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby stng75 » Tue May 18, 2010 5:53 am

When I ran the storyline that I made up
well this one seemed better

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby EmberSparks » Wed May 19, 2010 2:33 am

Okay, I see...
Man, at this rate G.R.A.V.E will never be completed.

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby stng75 » Wed May 19, 2010 3:56 am

Try harder u lazy basterd

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby EternalSorrow » Fri Jun 11, 2010 4:29 pm

stng75 wrote:Try harder u lazy basterd

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby pvtsharp » Thu Jun 17, 2010 5:32 am

EternalSorrow wrote:
stng75 wrote:Try harder u lazy basterd


Triple kill. Why did you quit in the first place?

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby EternalSorrow » Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:28 am

pvtsharp wrote:
EternalSorrow wrote:
stng75 wrote:Try harder u lazy basterd


Triple kill. Why did you quit in the first place?

Who quit?
Hikaru quit because he said he's going after "The Promised Land".
Seriously he's a weirdo...

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby Dracoplasm » Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:31 am

EternalSorrow wrote:
pvtsharp wrote:
stng75 wrote:Try harder u lazy basterd


Triple kill. Why did you quit in the first place?

Who quit?
Hikaru quit because he said he's going after "The Promised Land".
Seriously he's a weirdo...



Promised land?
His going to the promised land?
IMPOSSIBLE thats too far for him...
Its like in Israel.

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Re: No.14 Chapter 1

Postby EternalSorrow » Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:31 pm

The Promised Land is a place sought after by the nomadic Cetra — a legacy briefly taken up by Sephiroth, who mistakenly believed himself to be an Ancient. Aerith tells Cloud that the Promised Land may not be a specific place, but the Shinra Company believe otherwise and are intent on using Aerith to find it. Upon reaching the Northern Crater, Rufus Shinra comes to the conclusion that it is the Promised Land due to its vast quantity of natural Mako. In actuality, both the game and the Final Fantasy VII Ultimania Ω guidebook suggest that the Promised Land is no one specific place or thing, but rather something unique to each individual which brings that person supreme happiness.
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