A lonely girl.part 1.

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A lonely girl.part 1.

Post by missedmoi » Fri May 07, 2010 1:48 am

This is a girl named Pearl.She is a good student in school.
Her parents got divorced and she became an orpan.
Her dad used to always be drunk and her mom very busy,they used to always argue.
She had no friends.....She was alone all the time.When her parents got divorced she stayed in an orphanage since her parents are never home.She needed a home,she wanted to be around people and make friends and have a family.

She met a girl named Shanice.They didn't become friends.....
They became ennemies.Shanice has straight short brown hair and light brown eyes,she likes to insult people who are worst then her.

Pearl is a 12 year old.She is a nerd.But no one ever knows her that well.
"Pearl,can you tutor Jacob?"The teacher asks her.
Pearl was too shy to awnser.
"Pearl?can you?"The teacher asked again.
"sure,I can..."she finally awnsered.

At the orphanage was a serious looking lady sitting on a chair.
As soon as Pearl walked in,the lady started to walk towards the door and stopped right in front of Pearl.
The lady hugged Pearl.
"WHO ARE YOU!!??"Pearl screamed out loud.
"I am your mother..."The lady responded....
to be continued
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Re: A lonely girl.part 1.

Post by jonlin » Fri May 07, 2010 4:46 am

ummm... one thing.
this is your first time writing this story? I dislike jumping in randomly to stories... imagine jumping into ice cold water on a normal day, except not knowing what you're jumping into. that's my metaphor.

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Re: A lonely girl.part 1.

Post by missedmoi » Fri May 07, 2010 7:27 pm

yea,my first time,i know it sucks.

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