About 1 falling star and 2
- Kal15or12
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Hehe oks I'm currently writers blocked but uhhhhI have A LOT of my second story done so do you think I should just like cut it and start the third one or what? or do you not care and I discontinue it....
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Yes i have questions! is the planet green (as in full of life) or is it all dead?? Also where is the planet?? Why and when did Comet start living with Lace? How did Comet know that the pplz in the picture were her parents? and what did her parents look like? based on the pictures? Could she tell or were the pictures all black and white? What does North Star look like? Besides like Comet. ummm.....Was the city where the factory is when Comet went there all Dead like empty? Were the pplz inside the place in Regect all guys or children and girls as well?
Good writers block questions....
Good writers block questions....
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lolz ok the planet is practically all dead so yeah, the planet is where earth is today, Comet whent to live with Lace cause no one else would take her in, she knew the pplz in the picture where her parents cause she was in them to (she guessed they where), you get to know what they look like in ethier the second or the third book (depends) BUT U WILL KNOW, she could tell they where and no they wheren't in black and white, and if you can't tell what N.S. looks like im sorry I SUCK at destriptions, yes the factory was dead-emtpy, and last all the pplz in the place are adults much older then her and are both guys and girls!
I hoped I answer all your questions
I hoped I answer all your questions
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Yes and i am wtaching invader zim =3
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PandaBearz13 wrote:Yes and i am wtaching invader zim =3
off topic...anyways pandabear13 do u think i should discontinue falling star or what?
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Re: About 1 falling star and 2
Sure if you want to but put in more details plz
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oks ill finish my second story hole heartidly and i will try to put more details in it!!! might take awhile though
Re: About 1 falling star and 2
I do not like it. Therefore I hope you will not continue.
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LeoWu wrote:I do not like it. Therefore I hope you will not continue.
uhhh..ouch? ok sooo your one person over the many people who actuly veiwed my story...have you actuly read it anyway?
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ignore him kal
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PandaBearz13 wrote:ignore him kal
She can't
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Re: About 1 falling star and 2
LeoWu wrote:PandaBearz13 wrote:ignore him kal
She can't
Oooh.
a Flamer.
Great.
Now someone to compete for o.0
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I haven't read it yet, but if this story is what your passion is; you should continue it, no matter what critics say.
I'm a writer too. I've been writing stories since I was eight. I'm eighteen now, and my passion is writing stories. (Even if I stink, at least I didn't give up my dream && my passion to write)
Don't let critics decide your destiny.
So decide for yourself. But my vote would be; IF YOU enjoy writing it; KEEP writing it no matter what others say or think. Don't let the negative comments decide your future as a writer.
AND GOOD LUCK!
I'm a writer too. I've been writing stories since I was eight. I'm eighteen now, and my passion is writing stories. (Even if I stink, at least I didn't give up my dream && my passion to write)
Don't let critics decide your destiny.
So decide for yourself. But my vote would be; IF YOU enjoy writing it; KEEP writing it no matter what others say or think. Don't let the negative comments decide your future as a writer.
AND GOOD LUCK!
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Re: About 1 falling star and 2
LeoWu flames a lot.
Accept his criticism and move on!
Accept his criticism and move on!
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Re: About 1 falling star and 2
or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream
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I like the eating sea-salt icream idea better!!!!
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PandaBearz13 wrote:or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream
I agree upon continuing to write, however please don't reference KH. I hate it with a passion.
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Zaylo wrote:PandaBearz13 wrote:or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream
I agree upon continuing to write, however please don't reference KH. I hate it with a passion.
omg what is wroung with you??? KH is awsome!!!! lol jk jk!!!! ill be nice (considering your a moderator and I do not wish to be banned)
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Kal15or12 wrote:Zaylo wrote:PandaBearz13 wrote:or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream
I agree upon continuing to write, however please don't reference KH. I hate it with a passion.
omg what is wroung with you??? KH is awsome!!!! lol jk jk!!!! ill be nice (considering your a moderator and I do not wish to be banned)
LMAO everyone is like that. Zaylo, Am i the only one that has the guts to tell you your ff are handycapped babies?
Cuase they are! muahahhaha. BTW GUYS I GOT BANNED! HAHAH awesomeness my first time
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Re: About 1 falling star and 2
LeoWu wrote:I do not like it. Therefore I hope you will not continue.
your pitiful insolent trolling is nothing compared to that on facepunch.