About 1 falling star and 2

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About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Thu Apr 01, 2010 1:37 am

Hehe oks I'm currently writers blocked but uhhhhI have A LOT of my second story done so do you think I should just like cut it and start the third one or what? or do you not care and I discontinue it....

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by PandaBearz13 » Thu Apr 01, 2010 2:15 am

Yes i have questions! (cool) is the planet green (as in full of life) or is it all dead?? Also where is the planet?? Why and when did Comet start living with Lace? How did Comet know that the pplz in the picture were her parents? and what did her parents look like? based on the pictures? Could she tell or were the pictures all black and white? What does North Star look like? Besides like Comet. (F6) ummm.....Was the city where the factory is when Comet went there all Dead like empty? Were the pplz inside the place in Regect all guys or children and girls as well?



Good writers block questions....

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Thu Apr 01, 2010 3:10 am

lolz ok the planet is practically all dead so yeah, the planet is where earth is today, Comet whent to live with Lace cause no one else would take her in, she knew the pplz in the picture where her parents cause she was in them to (she guessed they where), you get to know what they look like in ethier the second or the third book (depends) BUT U WILL KNOW, she could tell they where and no they wheren't in black and white, and if you can't tell what N.S. looks like im sorry I SUCK at destriptions, yes the factory was dead-emtpy, and last all the pplz in the place are adults much older then her and are both guys and girls!

I hoped I answer all your questions (cool)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by PandaBearz13 » Sat Apr 03, 2010 1:31 am

Yes and i am wtaching invader zim =3

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:16 am

PandaBearz13 wrote:Yes and i am wtaching invader zim =3


off topic...anyways pandabear13 do u think i should discontinue falling star or what?

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by PandaBearz13 » Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:33 am

Sure if you want to but put in more details plz (cool)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:49 pm

oks ill finish my second story hole heartidly and i will try to put more details in it!!! might take awhile though (F3)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by LeoWu » Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:53 am

I do not like it. Therefore I hope you will not continue.

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Thu Apr 15, 2010 1:34 am

LeoWu wrote:I do not like it. Therefore I hope you will not continue.


uhhh..ouch? ok sooo your one person over the many people who actuly veiwed my story...have you actuly read it anyway? (F6)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by PandaBearz13 » Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:42 pm

ignore him kal (F3)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by LeoWu » Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:50 am

PandaBearz13 wrote:ignore him kal (F3)


She can't :P

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Dracoplasm » Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:21 am

LeoWu wrote:
PandaBearz13 wrote:ignore him kal (F3)


She can't :P


Oooh.
a Flamer.
Great.
Now someone to compete for o.0

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Superish » Sun Apr 18, 2010 6:11 pm

I haven't read it yet, but if this story is what your passion is; you should continue it, no matter what critics say. (gatorade-3)


I'm a writer too. I've been writing stories since I was eight. I'm eighteen now, and my passion is writing stories. (Even if I stink, at least I didn't give up my dream && my passion to write)

Don't let critics decide your destiny. (skygar9-5)

So decide for yourself. But my vote would be; IF YOU enjoy writing it; KEEP writing it no matter what others say or think. Don't let the negative comments decide your future as a writer.

AND GOOD LUCK! (cool)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by EmberSparks » Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:53 am

LeoWu flames a lot.
Accept his criticism and move on!

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by PandaBearz13 » Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:04 am

or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream (cool)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:07 am

I like the eating sea-salt icream idea better!!!! (F2)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Zaylo » Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:24 pm

PandaBearz13 wrote:or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream (cool)

I agree upon continuing to write, however please don't reference KH. I hate it with a passion.

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by Kal15or12 » Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:18 pm

Zaylo wrote:
PandaBearz13 wrote:or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream (cool)

I agree upon continuing to write, however please don't reference KH. I hate it with a passion.


omg what is wroung with you??? KH is awsome!!!! lol jk jk!!!! ill be nice (considering your a moderator and I do not wish to be banned)

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by LeoWu » Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:57 pm

Kal15or12 wrote:
Zaylo wrote:
PandaBearz13 wrote:or just ignore all and eat sea-salt ice cream (cool)

I agree upon continuing to write, however please don't reference KH. I hate it with a passion.


omg what is wroung with you??? KH is awsome!!!! lol jk jk!!!! ill be nice (considering your a moderator and I do not wish to be banned)


LMAO everyone is like that. Zaylo, Am i the only one that has the guts to tell you your ff are handycapped babies?
Cuase they are! muahahhaha. BTW GUYS I GOT BANNED! HAHAH awesomeness my first time :P

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Re: About 1 falling star and 2

Post by lolificated » Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:02 pm

LeoWu wrote:I do not like it. Therefore I hope you will not continue.

your pitiful insolent trolling is nothing compared to that on facepunch.

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