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Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:44 am

Yes,Finally...

A girl fell down from the sky.She had brown hair,and red glasses."I am not dying..." she thought,as she plummeted down.She managed to get back up,with the rest of her strength.

"Are you dead yet?" yelled a other girl.She had metallic wings,and a trident.She had a snake around her wrist.Her black hair flew in front of her red eyes.She tossed a metal plate at the girl.

"Urgggghhh..." said the brown haired girl.She was now bleeding."N-no,I'm not.You you are the one who will be dead!" she yelled.She drew a skanda,and tossed a few stars.

"Wha-" the winged girl choked out.She was hit by a star near the heart.Her lung was punctured.The winged girl fell down,gasping for air.It was no use.The air escaped her lungs.She lay there,dead.The last of the air escaped.The brown-haired girl walked over and got her trident.She pushed it through the girl's heart.

"That should do it," said the brown haired girl.

Thats It.I'm lazy to add on,plus I still have Dragons of Fate.

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by pvtsharp » Sat Mar 27, 2010 5:21 am

erm..... it's short... and *runs away*

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:40 am

MsMeowzers wrote:Yes,Finally...

A girl fell down from the sky.She had brown hair,and red glasses."I am not dying..." she thought,as she plummeted down.She managed to get back up,with the rest of her strength.

"Are you dead yet?" yelled a other girl.She had metallic wings,and a trident.She had a snake around her wrist.Her black hair flew in front of her red eyes.She tossed a metal plate at the girl.

"Urgggghhh..." said the brown haired girl.She was now bleeding."N-no,I'm not.You you are the one who will be dead!" she yelled.She drew a skanda,and tossed a few stars.

"Wha-" the winged girl choked out.She was hit by a star near the heart.Her lung was punctured.The winged girl fell down,gasping for air.It was no use.The air escaped her lungs.She lay there,dead.The last of the air escaped.The brown-haired girl walked over and got her trident.She pushed it through the girl's heart.

"That should do it," said the brown haired girl.

Thats It.I'm lazy to add on,plus I still have Dragons of Fate.


Hmmm.... It's a little short, but it's a prologue, anyway.
BTW Is it 'prolouge' or 'prologue'?
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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:55 pm

It was near 3 am.I was tired,waiting for my mother to get home.
So I wrote this.

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by Otaku » Sat Mar 27, 2010 11:10 pm

Can you tell us who got in for the sign-ups or are you just scrapping that thread?

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Mar 28, 2010 2:13 am

Everyone got it.
First 4 will be in chapter 1.

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by LeoWu » Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:58 am

Whoa, Terrible, Just wow, horrible.

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by EmberSparks » Mon Apr 19, 2010 4:56 am

LeoWu wrote:Whoa, Terrible, Just wow, horrible.

Yeah, welcome back to MapleAnime, LeoWu.... (redface)

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by pvtsharp » Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:48 am

EmberSparks wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Whoa, Terrible, Just wow, horrible.

Yeah, welcome back to MapleAnime, LeoWu.... (redface)

Let's beat him up!

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by CoolKid » Wed May 05, 2010 1:39 am

cool story
and beat up leowu! lol ive seen what hes done to kai53 or somthing
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it awsome I LOVE IT

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by stng75 » Fri May 14, 2010 3:50 am

It's good but it's to short =/

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by jonlin » Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:07 am

good... but this is soo short D: and uncontinued D:

basically, continue it and make them longer :D

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:39 am

Workings...
Ugh..Scripts,Luna Dial,Dragons of Fate 4,and my coding training....Wait a second,why am I learning coding again?Oh yeah..to make a flash game of Lu-*Slapped*

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by jonlin » Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:43 am

lol, so you dropped the Vampire story? oh, and if you want help with the scripts, you should ask Zaylo, he knows touhou, doesn't he? Finally, what language is the code in?

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:50 am

jonlin wrote:lol, so you dropped the Vampire story? oh, and if you want help with the scripts, you should ask Zaylo, he knows touhou, doesn't he? Finally, what language is the code in?

Dad's teaching me C++,and I'm learning another kind myself...I forget.
*Edit* Finished half of chapter 1...BOTHER BOTHER BOTHER THIS AND THAT LEAVE ME ALONE FREAKING AVAST

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by jonlin » Sat Jun 05, 2010 3:14 am

lol, k. C++ is annoying :P (flash is funner and easier)...

anyways, pm me a sample script soon?

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jun 05, 2010 3:34 am

jonlin wrote:lol, k. C++ is annoying :P (flash is funner and easier)...

anyways, pm me a sample script soon?

C++ is awesome though...
Unreal coders can do many things.I'm making basic ufo's for a MMO based server.

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by EternalSorrow » Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:15 pm

So you are Hikaru's girlfriend...
He is obsessed with you at school... whenever a girl asks him out he declines because of you.

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by jonlin » Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:41 am

um, what. the. f**k.

anyways, eh, I dunno I just haven't tried C++ 0.o. I might try now... do you know where I can download a free C++ manipulator?

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Re: Luna Dial Prolouge

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:50 am

jonlin wrote:um, what. the. f**k.

anyways, eh, I dunno I just haven't tried C++ 0.o. I might try now... do you know where I can download a free C++ manipulator?

I got two large C++ coding guides.FROM A COLLEGE.
I don't know about manipulators.

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