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G.R.A.V.E Ch 3

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:41 am

Ow, I'm so in trouble.
My school holiday is almost over and I haven't done my homework. Crap.
Also, I wish to apologize to PvtSharp in advance for some stuff I'm about to write underneath.
Oh w/e, lets get onto the story.....



Darkness surrounded him. He glanced at his hand - he didn't see his sword anywhere. Feeling slightly uneasy, Hikaru looked around him. Nothing but more darkness.

Suddenly, he heard a deep, throaty laugh. The voice came from every direction - there was no way to tell the location of it's source. Hikaru held back an urge to scream and covered his ears.

There was a voice in his head, saying: You and I are the same.... light and darkness have the same root, as do harmony and disorder.........

"AAAAAAAAGGGHHHH!!!!!!!"

Hikaru fell off his bed, yelling. He realised he was in his pyjamas, and there was a small puddle around him. He had apparently wet his pants.

"Need some help?"

A young boy, aged about 13, held his hand out towards Hikaru. He smiled. The boy was wearing a white beanie, with a rose in his mouth. His eyes had a mischievious gleam as he helped Hikaru up to his feet. In the distance, a bunch of schoolgirls squealed.

"Oh my god, it's head of Crescent Unit, Robin!" "Dam, he's cute!"

Hikaru did a facepalm. "Thanks, Robin."

"Aw, it's okay. I heard about what happened the day before yesterday - heard that you completed a Grade-1 mission all by yourself. Impressive."

Day before yesterday?! That meant he had been out cold for a whole day! Hikaru felt woozy.

Robin, at the age of 10, became the youngest person to ever join Crescent Unit, the elite cabal of G.R.A.V.E's greatest members. 3 years later, he became the leader of the squad, a new record in the history of G.R.A.V.E.

"Hey, Hikaru..." said Robin suddenly. "Do you need some pants? I think you..."

Before Robin could finish his sentence, Hikaru grabbed some clothes from the supply pod by his bed and ran off without a word.

Robin sighed. "Hard to believe he's actually OLDER than me.... hmmmm. Ah well, back to work."

******

Hikaru changed into a G.R.A.V.E uniform and walked around aimlessly. The G.R.A.V.E fort was in the middle of Kerning City. It was known to the public as Maple Police Force Kerning Division to most people, but sometimes G.R.A.V.E selected powerful Maplers from around the Maple World and made them join G.R.A.V.E. The only exception was Hikaru, as he was born in G.R.A.V.E. He never had any parents since birth, and believed his only purpose was to fight for G.R.A.V.E.

After a few minutes of wandering, he ended up in the cafeteria. He grabbed a copy of G.R.A.V.E's self-published newspaper. The headline read 'Chobbi is the Light'. Hikaru muttered something and sat down to have some coffee.

Chobbi Light was the most famous member of G.R.A.V.E. He held the record for completing the most missions. It was said that he could destroy a thousand vampires in a single sweep of his Cookies, chocolate chip biscuits that could shift between a giant throwing star-boomerang, a sword, a hammer and nnumerous other weapons. As Chobbi could create as many cookies as he wanted out of thin air, they also served as a tasty snack for whenever he got hungry.

Suddenly, someone said "Heads up!"

Hikaru stood up with a jolt. Chobbi was walking towards him, munching cookies along the way. Finally, he can to a stop in front of Hikaru.

"Hiruka," he said.

"It's Hikaru, dumbass..." muttered Hikaru.

Chobbi snorted. "Master Kite wants to see you. He's waiting in his office."

Why would he want to see me? thought Hikaru. "OK, I'll be there."

Chobbi disappeared in a puff of cookie crumbs. Without hesitation, Hikaru dashed toward the elevator and headed to the 12th floor: Kite's Office.

A few seconds later, he arriced at the office. The office was cluttered with books, and computers and wires were strewn all over the porcelain floor.

"Ah, Hikaru! Nice to see you up on your feet again!"

A young boy walked towards Hikaru. He was Kite Ikutsuki, and he was actually 444 years old. When he was a small kid, he accidentally used one of the secret skill scrolls and his body had never aged since. Also, he was immortal, meaning he would never die unless som,eonne killed him.

"Master Kite." Hikaru bowed down.

"Ah, na li, na li, sit down!" said Kite.

Both of them sat down on the floor. Kite snapped his fingers and a screen behind him lit up, showing pictures of numerous n@ked girls.

"Oh sh-" Kite hurriedly switched of that screen and switched onn another one. A photo of a teenage boy in a beanie filled the screen. It was Draco.

"Know him?" asked Kite.

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Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 3

Post by pvtsharp » Sat Feb 20, 2010 12:14 pm

lol funny, i'm using chinese in your fanfic ==

anyways come chat i wanna talk to you

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Post by EmberSparks » Sun Feb 21, 2010 6:05 am

Haha, I'll tell u a joke.
One day, a certain American president went to China to visit Mr.Mao.
Of course, Mr. Mao brought along Mrs. Mao....
President: You look beautiful today, ma'am.
(translator translates it to chinese)
Mrs. Mao: Na li, Na li! (where, where?)
Translator: Mrs. Mao wishes to know which part of her body you are referring to.
President: *dumbfounded*

Whoever can guess the president gets a cookieeee~

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Post by pvtsharp » Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:53 pm

EmberSparks wrote:Haha, I'll tell u a joke.
One day, a certain American president went to China to visit Mr.Mao.
Of course, Mr. Mao brought along Mrs. Mao....
President: You look beautiful today, ma'am.
(translator translates it to chinese)
Mrs. Mao: Na li, Na li! (where, where?)
Translator: Mrs. Mao wishes to know which part of her body you are referring to.
President: *dumbfounded*

Whoever can guess the president gets a cookieeee~


Mao zhe dong the crazed fella.

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Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 3

Post by playa4life01 » Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:54 pm

pvtsharp wrote:
EmberSparks wrote:Haha, I'll tell u a joke.
One day, a certain American president went to China to visit Mr.Mao.
Of course, Mr. Mao brought along Mrs. Mao....
President: You look beautiful today, ma'am.
(translator translates it to chinese)
Mrs. Mao: Na li, Na li! (where, where?)
Translator: Mrs. Mao wishes to know which part of her body you are referring to.
President: *dumbfounded*

Whoever can guess the president gets a cookieeee~


Mao zhe dong the crazed fella.


ding dong ?? (skygar9-4) (F6)

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Post by EmberSparks » Fri Feb 26, 2010 5:39 am

Mao Zhe Dong was a great Chinese.... oh screw that I don't really know much about him actually.

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Re: G.R.A.V.E Ch 3

Post by Gatorade » Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:41 pm

YAY!!!
10/10!!!!

So i'm cute? (F6) (F6) (F6)

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Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:24 am

10/10
I loled at the end.

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Post by EmberSparks » Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:35 am

Gatorade wrote:YAY!!!
10/10!!!!

So i'm cute? (F6) (F6) (F6)

Uh, you could say so....

MsMeowzers wrote:10/10
I loled at the end.

HENTAI!!!!!

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Post by pvtsharp » Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:19 pm

EmberSparks wrote:
Gatorade wrote:YAY!!!
10/10!!!!

So i'm cute? (F6) (F6) (F6)

Uh, you could say so....

MsMeowzers wrote:10/10
I loled at the end.

HENTAI!!!!!


Idiot.

*smacks ember's head with a book*

I wanna see myself fighting in one of the chapters.

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Post by EmberSparks » Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:56 am

Um, sharp you won't fight.... I mean you won't see yourself fighting, but you will be fighting.... something like:

G.R.A.V.E. Chapter ??? wrote:Hikaru yelled at Erdem. "Hurry up! Master Kite is fighting on his own at West Wing! We have to hurry!"

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Post by Dracoplasm » Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:38 am

Lol is that me at the end of the fanfic? =D

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Post by EmberSparks » Wed Mar 03, 2010 12:29 pm

Dracoplasm wrote:Lol is that me at the end of the fanfic? =D

oo that's Mr.Playa....
PM me with your char name.... gonna put you in soon...

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