Paralelelelagram Ch2

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Paralelelelagram Ch2

Post by crutchfield » Sat Feb 06, 2010 4:17 am

"You have lived your entire life killing. Now you get what is deserved." Tod could hear a mysterious voice say. Suddenly a shadow with glowing red eyes stared at him. Tod prepared his knife for any dangers. The dark figure collapsed and darkness spread around Tod. Tod tried to yell out but he couldn't talk. His lips were sewn shut in a sadistic manner. He began to panic. Starting at a walk and steadily going faster, Tod searched for an exit from the darkness. He tried to lift his feet but it felt as if something was pulling him down. He looked at his feet and saw as the darkness swallowed them. It seemed like the end. Unable to talk or move, Tod lost hope.

"This is just the begining of your punishment." the voice said. The darkness moved from Tod's ankles to his knees and then to his waist. The darkness wasn't only holding him in place, it was now burning.
The burning darkness then went all the way to his shoulders. Tod realized he would drown in the darkness. It began to cover his mouth. He wasn't drowning, he was choking. The darkness was burning his body and with every breath it felt as if he had inhaled poisonus gas. His whole head was now submerged. He noticed how light his plae skin and green shirt looked compared to the darkness. He felt himself falling. He realized that the darkness was the only thing holding him up. He continued to fall. He suddenly fell into what looked like his room. It was his room but some thing was different. There was nothing but his bed. No door, no windows, not even the small blue chair that was in the corner. He felt as if he was about to collapse. He went to his bed and layed down.

Tod dozed off as he heard "It's time for the real fun to begin."

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Re: Paralelelelagram Ch2

Post by Gatorade » Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:24 pm

2/10 - Enough said.

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Re: Paralelelelagram Ch2

Post by EmberSparks » Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:44 am

Gatorade wrote:2/10 - Enough said.

What? Why?
4/10. TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!! (F5) (F5) (F5)

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