Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

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Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by pvtsharp » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:34 pm

Yay imma mushroom agn (MS3) .
Sry, i was at melaka for the past 2 days......
Wonder if anyone will care abt my fanfic when zaylo is writing now.

Prolouge
Chpater 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

Chapter 5 : The Rebellion

"You guys ready?" said a 15 year old girl. She had one eye covered in a patch, her hair was slightly messy under her beanie hat.

"Sure, Ceira." said a 13 year old boy with white hair and winter battle clothes. "What about you, James?"

"Hmph." replied a 11 year old boy. He had blue windswept hair and bright, blue eyes. "Sure" -James fiddled around with his steely- "Come on, Bleed, let's get a move on."

"Ok the, I shall start-" said Bleed when James ran out of the kerning potion shop. "Nevermind, Ceira, let's go before the kid hurts himself."

Ceira nodded and James shouted from outside: "Oi! I heard that!"

Together, Ceira and Bleed ran outside.

"Let's meet with Boyko and regroup with the other members of the team." said Bleed.
**********

On the Kerning crane, a 12 year old boy was fending off 2 Dark Wings at once by flinging around his steelies. The boy had light brown spiky hair and he was wearing a white jacket with black jeans.

"A little help here thank you!" shouted the boy.

"I'm coming!" shouted a 12 year old girl as she gave an almighty swing from her Berserker and sent the Dark Wing she was fighting flying down to the ground. Then she turned and cleaved at one of the Dark Wings which the boy was fighting.

"Eheh." said the boy as he blocked the Dark Wing's punch with one of his arms, then he threw a steely to the stomach of the Dark Wing with his other arm. The Dark Wing died and fell to the floor with a dull thud. The girl swinged her Berserker and the Dark Wing she was fighting fell into his own pool of blood.

"Awww, I just cleaned my wings." said the girl when some of the blood from the Dark Wing was splattered on her angel wings and her long, silky hair.

"Don't worry, you can clean them anytime soon, Amanda." said the boy.

"I guess your right, Boyko" she sighed.

***********

"We're here, the great Mu Lung." said Zeno.

"Shut up." said Rathmire. "What's so great about this dusty old place anyways."

Next thing he knew, Rathmire was punched in the back of the head by someone.

"Who-" said Rathmire as he turned round. He say a pretty 10 year old girl. She had a huge sword strapped to her back on her red kimono.

"How dare you insult my hometown!" shouted the girl.

"And you are? Hmph, kids." said Rathmire.

"I'm Yahaka! Great warrior of Mu Lung." shouted the girl in pride.

"Psst, kids." said Rathmire.

"WHAT? HOW DARE YOU?" shouted the girl in rage. A horn grew out of her forehead and her sword turned blood red.

"What the?" said Rathmire in surpirze.

Zeno went back to the ship while Rathmire was beaten up by Yahaka.

"Wonder how that spearman is doing?" said Zeno.

Poe was in a corner with his face in his hands, sobbing quietly.

"Come on, or the ship will move." said Zeno.

Poe looked up, he broke into a watery smile and walked out of the ship with Zeno, only to see Yahka steeping on Rathmire's face.

"And that's for insulting ME!" said Yahaka and she walked gracefully back to Mu Lung.

"Ouch." said Rathmire.

**********

Ceira, Bleed and James reached the Kerning swamp entrance and saw Boyko and Amanda waiting there.

"Hi guys!" said Ceira as Boyko and Amanda looked up.

"Hi." said Boyko and Amanda.

"So what's next?" asked Bleed.

"We need some information. If we need to-" said Boyko.

"I got just the guy." interrupted James. "Ash, the info merchant in Sleepywood. He may demand some funds but we can afford it."

"How do you know all these stuff?" asked Amanda curiously.

"Experience." replied James simply.

"Ok then, let's go via the swamp, there should be less Dark Wings there.

And they all set off.

**********

"Fire Strike!" shouted Leaf as a beam of fire fired from his wand, causing Dark Wings to burn into ashes.

The Knights of Cygnus were protecting Erev all they can, but it was futile. Every Dark Wing they kill, two more appear at the entrance.

"Tell the Queen to go NOW!" shouted Ninehearts as he cast a protective spell.

"Yes sir!" said a Knight as he went to tell the Queen.

"Come on, we just need to resist a little longer......." said Leaf. As he summoned Ifrit to help him fight. "Just a little longer...."

To be continued.....

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:22 pm

I was laughing whenever Yahaka went into Oni form.

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by poke1024 » Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:21 pm

IM SUPPOSED TO BE A DRAGON KNIGHT, GET IT STRAIGHT

otherwise, not bad (F3)

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:30 pm

Im making something with that part right now...
Something to upload onto youtube!

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by jonlin » Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:38 pm

>:(

How DARE you make my character get beaten up lol

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:38 pm

Its the power of my oni.:3

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by jonlin » Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:40 pm

ACTUALLY it's prolly because you made your character overpowered, in typical 'I WANNA BE IN TEH STORY' form

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:42 pm

She's just ten,and I made her sometime near whenever the form was made.
Onis always want to fight whenever they are in their oni form.

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by pvtsharp » Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:14 am

(MS1) LOL random fight over power.....

Maybe i should stop writing to maintain peace, what do you guys think? (F3)

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by rocker002 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:54 pm

i wasnt in it... (F3) and u added to many chacters to fast u have to ease there way in now pack em all in one chp

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by LeoWu » Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:30 am

WTF I still cant believe It JONLIN's GUY GOT BEAT UP.
WTF WTF WTF.
THIS STORY SUCKS!!
WTF
Jonlin is Like Tiger of maplekombat.
Zaylo is the noob that gets killed :P
And me..
Muhahaha.
Im butter:P

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by Dracoplasm » Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:13 am

Omfg You didn't Read meh app XD

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by pvtsharp » Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:49 am

LeoWu wrote:WTF I still cant believe It JONLIN's GUY GOT BEAT UP.
WTF WTF WTF.
THIS STORY SUCKS!!
WTF
Jonlin is Like Tiger of maplekombat.
Zaylo is the noob that gets killed :P
And me..
Muhahaha.
Im butter:P


ok srsly, maybe i should stop for my own sake..... (F4)

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by EmberSparks » Tue Jan 05, 2010 4:44 pm

LeoWu wrote:WTF I still cant believe It JONLIN's GUY GOT BEAT UP.
WTF WTF WTF.
THIS STORY SUCKS!!
WTF
Jonlin is Like Tiger of maplekombat.
Zaylo is the noob that gets killed :P
And me..
Muhahaha.
Im butter:P

You're butter? (F6)

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by Dracoplasm » Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:24 am

Nope his trying to be some random guy in Maple Kombat -.-

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:59 am

LeoWu wrote:WTF I still cant believe It JONLIN's GUY GOT BEAT UP.
WTF WTF WTF.
THIS STORY SUCKS!!
WTF
Jonlin is Like Tiger of maplekombat.
Zaylo is the noob that gets killed :P
And me..
Muhahaha.
Im better:P

Oni's are strong mythical creatures.
Mine is as powerful as Sharp wants.
And fixed ya there,its better not butter.

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 09, 2010 3:14 am

Nope =.=
Meowzerz Read
LeoWu's Talking about Maple Kombat
Which Means its Butter= some dude
not Better =.=

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by playa4life01 » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:32 pm

why isnt the smexiest person around here not in it ?? (F4)

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by rocker002 » Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:34 am

wow im done reading this crap f3 lo i quit this website anyway y do i care

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Re: Tree Of Origin : Chapter 5

Post by playa4life01 » Wed Jan 13, 2010 3:37 pm

rocker002 wrote:wow im done reading this crap f3 lo i quit this website anyway y do i care

wtf are you talking about, its a nice story
it just skips alot to other places

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