Maple Maiden Project Prologue

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Zaylo
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Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by Zaylo » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:02 pm

Explosions lined the forest, the bitter smell of gun powder wafted through the air and canceled out the smells of forest life and plants.

D-Damn it! What are those things?

This time gunshots overwhelmed the sounds of the forest, the snap of a twig, the babbling of the small river, so much could be over looked from such a sound. They cut the wind around the girl who was flying through the air. The bullets would miss her by millimeters, not a single mistake could be made. Rules had been thrown out, obviously magic wasn't going to help this time. All the girl could hope was the reach her destination in time.

Yukari. Her name was written on a small board in front of the bed where she slept. A woman in a strange blue and red outfit walked into the room frowning, never before had she seen wounds like these.

If we weren't there so quick... there's no telling what would have happened...

During this moment someone had taken advantage of Yukari's condition and left the world by breaking the barrier separating the two worlds. Yukari would ensure that this would never happen normally, but its not like swiss cheese could stop him now could it?

All according to plan.


The barrier had been broken, yet it was calm much like the ocean...


Like i said, its just a quick prologue, chapters will be much longer.
Rate and why.

Sorry if it doesnt live up to the series names, or my reputation.
Note descriptions were left out on purpose.
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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by jonlin » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:05 pm

cool! I am just wondering..... did I make it in :P?

also, you are right it's not QUITE up to your usual standards but it's good :D

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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by Zaylo » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:07 pm

jonlin wrote:cool! I am just wondering..... did I make it in :P?

also, you are right it's not QUITE up to your usual standards but it's good :D

it's a lot shorter, just ment to tease viewers i suppose.
and to show i actually want to do it lol. Quality will improve chapter 1.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:23 am

Awesome XD
The Prologue was Great

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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:43 am

Yukari Ftw
Im going to be so happy when this come out.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by playa4life01 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:44 am

i dun get it,
does it jump from 1scene to another or sumthing ?? starting from yukari and the bed stuff ??

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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by Zaylo » Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:39 pm

This just got bumped

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Re: Maple Maiden Project Prologue

Post by EmberSparks » Thu Mar 04, 2010 2:05 am

Did you quit?
Why no more chapters?

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