The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
"You've got to be f*****g kidding me......how didn't we realize this earlier?" Drake and I sat in shock just staring at Jonah. I could see what he meant though. In that last fight something inside me....just seeing Drake fight....it made me want to kill him. I realized now that I was part of something bigger than myself and what I wanted. I would decide the fate of this world, and I wanted to rule it. Supreme dictator me...it would've been a scary thought to a regular person, but I wasn't a regular person anymore. I was a complete demon.
"Well its obvious what's going to happen so I say we pick sides. I'm going with the obvious winner here. Chaos, I'm with you." Brandon's choice was made pretty obvious. Time passed and the others came around and chose their sides. This was gonna be an all out war.
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2 Months later....
Azure walked the streets of Singapore as he normally would. His watchful eyes darting here and there....watching....waiting. He stood near an alley for a moment when suddenly he was attacked.
"Its been a while hasn't it? I've missed you so. Unfortunately to give Chaos a better chance you have to die." Brandon jumped from the alley, flames engulfing him and the mini van he was carrying. Azure crushed the car with his bare hands and smashed Brandon into a nearby building. Brandon kicked Azure hard in the face and broke his hold. Azure retaliated by smashing the building around him and Brandon. Brandon barely got out and ran for his life. Azure chased him down and cornered him at the airport.
"So this is where you'll make your final stand? Fine....so be it." Azure charged with the speed and force of a 20 ton wrecking ball, crushing Brandon with one of his fists. Brandon flew back into an airplane, but making a quick recovery. Brandon shot blast after blast of fire but it had no effect against Azure's diamond skin. Azure simply walked up to Brandon confidently as if he had already sealed Brandon's fate.
"Why do you try? what do you have to gain from this? You'll just die in the end. Drake will kill you if I don't." Azure kicked Brandon hard in the stomach bringing Brandon to his knees. "You're pitiful....dying like a dog. All for nothing too. Well I guess i'll be nice and give you at least one last wish." Azure walked to where the planes were, picked one up and brought it to just above Brandon's head. "Any last words?"
"Yeah.....go to hell." Azure shrugged and crushed Brandon below the massive plane. He walked away happy that his job was done. Happy that is until he heard a rumbling from beneath the pile of plane wreckage.
"Oh sh*t." The wreckage began to glow redder and redder as if it were heating up. Azure dived to the ground as a massive explosion destroyed everything behind him. Brandon walked out of the wreckage burning more than ever. The air crackled with murderous intent and pure heat.
"You know...in these last two months I've learned something about myself. My powers aren't just fire. I control heat in general. How does that make you feel? Knowing that I can kill you in an instant? Hahahahhahaha....oh this'll be fun. I don't think I'll kill you but torture you. You know what the earth's core is made of right? Molten metal." Brandon put his hands to the ground and the ground started to rumble and shake. Soon enough geysers of molten hot metal were shooting from the ground. "I'll destroy this city and everyone in it! You're the first buddy of mine." The liquid metal started to revolve around Brandon as he rose in the air. The metal started orbiting him, completely at his beck and call. Civilians ran in fear of being cast in metal for eternity. It was no use though. He killed them all. Every last one of them while horridly laughing as if he was playing a game. He toyed with the people and eventually killed them all until only Azure was left alive. "So now it's come to this? How did it happen? Oh right. You joined that traitor Drake. Now you will be the first of his to die. Any last words?" Before Azure could even speak Brandon rained metal on him. It flooded over him and dried instantly. Azure's only last thoughts were regret. Regret that he couldn't stop this madman.
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Elsewhere.....
"Come on Alice I know you're there somewhere. I won't hurt you. Ok I will hurt you. I'll torture you for that matter! These woods are mine! You can't hide forever." Alice hid in the trees waiting for the more than inevitable death at the hands of Ally. Even though she realized she wouldn't make it through, she wasn't going to go down without a fight.
To Be Continued.......
"Well its obvious what's going to happen so I say we pick sides. I'm going with the obvious winner here. Chaos, I'm with you." Brandon's choice was made pretty obvious. Time passed and the others came around and chose their sides. This was gonna be an all out war.
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2 Months later....
Azure walked the streets of Singapore as he normally would. His watchful eyes darting here and there....watching....waiting. He stood near an alley for a moment when suddenly he was attacked.
"Its been a while hasn't it? I've missed you so. Unfortunately to give Chaos a better chance you have to die." Brandon jumped from the alley, flames engulfing him and the mini van he was carrying. Azure crushed the car with his bare hands and smashed Brandon into a nearby building. Brandon kicked Azure hard in the face and broke his hold. Azure retaliated by smashing the building around him and Brandon. Brandon barely got out and ran for his life. Azure chased him down and cornered him at the airport.
"So this is where you'll make your final stand? Fine....so be it." Azure charged with the speed and force of a 20 ton wrecking ball, crushing Brandon with one of his fists. Brandon flew back into an airplane, but making a quick recovery. Brandon shot blast after blast of fire but it had no effect against Azure's diamond skin. Azure simply walked up to Brandon confidently as if he had already sealed Brandon's fate.
"Why do you try? what do you have to gain from this? You'll just die in the end. Drake will kill you if I don't." Azure kicked Brandon hard in the stomach bringing Brandon to his knees. "You're pitiful....dying like a dog. All for nothing too. Well I guess i'll be nice and give you at least one last wish." Azure walked to where the planes were, picked one up and brought it to just above Brandon's head. "Any last words?"
"Yeah.....go to hell." Azure shrugged and crushed Brandon below the massive plane. He walked away happy that his job was done. Happy that is until he heard a rumbling from beneath the pile of plane wreckage.
"Oh sh*t." The wreckage began to glow redder and redder as if it were heating up. Azure dived to the ground as a massive explosion destroyed everything behind him. Brandon walked out of the wreckage burning more than ever. The air crackled with murderous intent and pure heat.
"You know...in these last two months I've learned something about myself. My powers aren't just fire. I control heat in general. How does that make you feel? Knowing that I can kill you in an instant? Hahahahhahaha....oh this'll be fun. I don't think I'll kill you but torture you. You know what the earth's core is made of right? Molten metal." Brandon put his hands to the ground and the ground started to rumble and shake. Soon enough geysers of molten hot metal were shooting from the ground. "I'll destroy this city and everyone in it! You're the first buddy of mine." The liquid metal started to revolve around Brandon as he rose in the air. The metal started orbiting him, completely at his beck and call. Civilians ran in fear of being cast in metal for eternity. It was no use though. He killed them all. Every last one of them while horridly laughing as if he was playing a game. He toyed with the people and eventually killed them all until only Azure was left alive. "So now it's come to this? How did it happen? Oh right. You joined that traitor Drake. Now you will be the first of his to die. Any last words?" Before Azure could even speak Brandon rained metal on him. It flooded over him and dried instantly. Azure's only last thoughts were regret. Regret that he couldn't stop this madman.
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Elsewhere.....
"Come on Alice I know you're there somewhere. I won't hurt you. Ok I will hurt you. I'll torture you for that matter! These woods are mine! You can't hide forever." Alice hid in the trees waiting for the more than inevitable death at the hands of Ally. Even though she realized she wouldn't make it through, she wasn't going to go down without a fight.
To Be Continued.......
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
whoa there some spaces plz
buts its great, u jus have to make the scenes more sceney
buts its great, u jus have to make the scenes more sceney
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
idk i dont really think that i did this chapter too well.
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
xD wow..
Lmao
~reading story while talking to myself~
"huh.. finally killed me off, eh? ...wait what?..."
"ZZUUUUUUUUUREE!!! "
anyway.. was good
Lmao
~reading story while talking to myself~
"huh.. finally killed me off, eh? ...wait what?..."
"ZZUUUUUUUUUREE!!! "
anyway.. was good
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
lol wow....you talk to yourself? thats a problemm....
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
i think to myself
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
thinking to yourself and talking to yourself are two different things......O.o
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
talking to yourself gives you a headache...
thinking to yourself IS your headache.
thinking to yourself IS your headache.
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
thinking in general just hurts you :p next story i write will be about john freeman with many wepon.....
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
lmao..nice..
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
lol i should write a story about john freeman xD
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
you gotta learn the language first... i think we already talk like that though
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Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
nice fanfic
wonderfull
theres only 1 thing missing
wonderfull
theres only 1 thing missing
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
....and it's not chobbi
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
does it need more wepon? cuz i has enough wepon
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turanza wrote:....and it's not chobbi
dammed
damn you freaking ....
damned that was the climax of the joke
you just killed the joke are you happy now?
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
meh......you were already in it. you got killed
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
psh.. ...
i was gonna get killed in the story to...
>.<
jerk.
killin chobbi of and not me...
i was gonna get killed in the story to...
>.<
jerk.
killin chobbi of and not me...
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synn90210 wrote:meh......you were already in it. you got killed
wich chapteR?
Re: The Ranger of Chaos-Harbinger of Doom pt2 ch5
shortly after arriving in ch 3 and brandon ur gonna get killed just watch