Maplestory

If you could See the future,
what would you do?

To me In this Universe, there is only One world of Life.
One world of Darkness.
And One world and Light.
And for Every day There are Seconds,
Minutes, hours.
I thought it over and over.
But Deep down
in my eyes,
In my Mind,
In my World.
There is time.
But the are only Seconds and Moments.

* * *

Seconds,
Minutes.
Hours.
Passed by.
Yet my soul,
My life. Depended on that
one moment.
And for that Time.
My body Will be filled with Darkness.
Curses, and for that moment,
Blood will be shed and My eyes
Will the be ones to see it.
For that one moment.
The sky Shall turn Dark
and Roar across the Victoria Island destroying it.
and My red eyes, Will be the ones to
make me believe it.
And for that Last part of that
Moment.
I will be standing there with my
Cursed arm Destroying Everything.
Lives, and everything i desire.
and then That one moment will be
gone.
and I will be back here.
In this wretched place.

Hell.


What do you stand for?
what do you love for?
what do you live for?

What do you die for?

One second,
One moment,
Just one.

nice preview leo! lol no names or anything to hint at a storyline

Nice. you may have alredi planned it, but i would tell the story from a few weeks b4 THE MOMENT

jonlin wrote:

nice preview leo! lol no names or anything to hint at a storyline

Lol Jolin glad to hear that.
One hint was He could
See the future.
at the beginning it said.
If I gave too much,
It wouldn't be fun anymore.
I Infact enjoyed writing this preview.
I do like it my self.

but the thing is I forgot to put it on
Microsoft
I guess i wont need it :3

Rate it?
:)

And since my came out you better start writing too.

nah I'm still waiting for synn
and for a rating, 99/100

btw I secretly never put my stories through word
(shhhhhhhh)

jonlin wrote:nah I'm still waiting for synn
and for a rating, 99/100

btw I secretly never put my stories through word
(shhhhhhhh)

lol 99/100
Didnt expect that O_O
Ugh SYNN START WRITING
Runs away*

on a scale from 1 to 10 . . .

4/10

skygar9 wrote:on a scale from 1 to 10 . . .

4/10

I dont expect you to Say anything about
My FF.
Pfft 4/10?

Makes me laugh.
If my was really 4/10
yours would be 0/1000.
Its useless talking to you,
You would only rate my story
4/10
probally cause you hate me.
If Someone else wrote
the same thing
and you were to rate it
I have no doubt it
would be much higher.

Are you like trying to flame my
FF?
hehe.

That doesnt affect me.
I know Im much better than you.
Dont worry.

skygar9 wrote:on a scale from 1 to 10 . . .

4/10

Uh oh
you calling him out!
i rate 10/10~
Write next chapter
Skyger it is not 4/10
I bet he can write 1333337 times better
than you you fat head.
Yo story bad very bery bad
Even i write better than you.

Zaylo Rate it? :)
....

rofl zaylo lurks, he only comments when he thinks a fanfic is either great or it really sucks.

jonlin wrote:rofl zaylo lurks, he only comments when he thinks a fanfic is either great or it really sucks.

in this case it was win. 7/10. Interesting preview i look forward to the next installment

LeoWu wrote:

skygar9 wrote:on a scale from 1 to 10 . . .

4/10

I dont expect you to Say anything about
My FF.
Pfft 4/10?

Makes me laugh.
If my was really 4/10
yours would be 0/1000.
Its useless talking to you,
You would only rate my story
4/10
probally cause you hate me.
If Someone else wrote
the same thing
and you were to rate it
I have no doubt it
would be much higher.

Are you like trying to flame my
FF?
hehe.

That doesnt affect me.
I know Im much better than you.
Dont worry.

Lol, you already released these words.

You get WAAAAAAY to easily offended. You just don't like to admit it.
Sure, you may be better than me but I don't care because I'm not a Fanfiction whore.
I am not flaming your fan fiction.

You need to learn me better; all those 'bloodshed' and 'kill you stab sword fighting' things aren't my type of fanfiction.

I go for the adventurous fan fictions with no blood and gore killing death stuff.
Most teenagers like you, tend to make fighting FanFictions
while I am more femenine than masculine, not liking Sword Fights.

oy, don't fight ... -.-'
it's just a story.....

skygar9 wrote:

LeoWu wrote:

skygar9 wrote:on a scale from 1 to 10 . . .

4/10

I dont expect you to Say anything about
My FF.
Pfft 4/10?

Makes me laugh.
If my was really 4/10
yours would be 0/1000.
Its useless talking to you,
You would only rate my story
4/10
probally cause you hate me.

If Someone else wrote
the same thing
and you were to rate it
I have no doubt it
would be much higher.

Are you like trying to flame my
FF?
hehe.

That doesnt affect me.
I know Im much better than you.
Dont worry.

Lol, you already released these words.

You get WAAAAAAY to easily offended. You just don't like to admit it.
Sure, you may be better than me but I don't care because I'm not a Fanfiction whore.
I am not flaming your fan fiction.

You need to learn me better; all those 'bloodshed' and 'kill you stab sword fighting' things aren't my type of fanfiction.

I go for the adventurous fan fictions with no blood and gore killing death stuff.
Most teenagers like you, tend to make fighting FanFictions
while I am more femenine than masculine, not liking Sword Fights.

Pfft writing that is more like an excuse, because after you
rated it 4/10
Zaylo rated it 7/10 O_O

By the way Zaylo thanks for the rating. thought it was more like an 5-6/10

And its better if you call me and pre-teen.
Im 12. not 13.

not bad. very descriptive. and caelin just put yours out because idk whats with my compy it always like does this weird thing when a post gets like so long. in this case my story soo idk when mine will be out. oh btw i give it an 8/10

oh.... lol I don't feel like writing right now but I'll put it put soon.

8/10.I have no idea why.Don't ask.Just seems great.

omg no hints just write the dam story

8/10 huh?
not bad i guess.
To be honest I didnt
exactly try.
although i did enjoy
writing this.
I probally wont
keep on writing this
FF series cause
It seems like no one
cares.