MapleTimes . Chapter 1 (1/3)

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MapleTimes . Chapter 1 (1/3)

Post by Magnet » Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:02 pm

-Meeps- This story belongs to Magnet . & is NOT allowed anywhere else without permission. -Meeps-

Once upon a Maple tale ...
Ever since the chaos started in Maple, the Maple world has been separated into five : Aquila, Bootes, Cassiopeia, Eridanus, Delphinus. (F6)

So ... how did the war started?
Well, just like in any other worlds, there are both good and evil. And of course, the evil demons will want to conquer the world and make it their own, settling chaos all over. Yeah, and so, it really did happen. The gods will surely defend the pure-hearted Maplers, won't they? And again, they did. I mean, of course they will. (F3)
& that's how the war started. The Maplers had to live in fear and danger for over 1000 years!

Well, that was thousand of years ago. Now, peace settled over the Maple World. Now, there's a scar in between the five lands, but it's closing up. Every land's people could travel to other lands just by sailing, flying, or even teleportation. Amazing, isn't it?

Every morning, the kids will travel to the Aquila. The Academy in Aquila is the one and only school in the Maple World, it's called, "Maplecademy" . & the adults will travel to Bootes to harvest veggies and more or Eridanus if they want to go fishing . While... the teenagers go to either Cassiopeia, Eridanus, Delphinus, to train their skills & prepare for their job advancement.

What is this 'Job advancement' thingy? Well, teenagers have to choose a job to advance to. These are the jobs : Warrior, Thief, Magician, Bowman, and lastly, Pirate.

To be continued ...

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Re: MapleTimes . Chapter 1 (1/3)

Post by jonlin » Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:00 pm

cool, good spelling and grammar, interesting storyline =p
one question, why don't the adults with jobs kill monsters? =p

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Re: MapleTimes . Chapter 1 (1/3)

Post by LeoWu » Tue Jun 30, 2009 2:37 am

The story is. ok, A little bit better than average I can tell you that.
The spelling, Grammar, is all ok.
But you still wanna expand your story more details
and descriptions. Overall I would rate a 5.5/10
pretty good :)
good luck on next chapter

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