Triple Seven Chapter 1

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Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Zaylo » Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:05 am

Long ago on an island not to far from Victoria:
Classical music sounded through out the hall. Men and women danced within it. The woman, in yellow dresses the men in black tuxedos. Waiters served some guests with refreshments. The room was decorated in gold ribbons hanging from above balconies. Pillars held up the small balconies like the ground holding the sky. A grand evening… who could believe it would turn so sour? A much older man with a small white beard stood upon the highest stair on a carpeted staircase. He had a cup of wine in his hand in his other a silver spoon. He hit the spoon against the glass a pleasant sound rang out. The guests all turned to face the man. The men bowed and the women curtseyed.
The man began “Hello friends, acquaintances and family.” The voice was powerful, commanding but caring. “Today we celebrate a grand day, the day of legacy!” A woman with blond hair, and a yellow dress stood by him. “Tonight we, the Pierce Clan will rule this island! No one can stand in our way. No obstacle can stop us. No one… NO ONE will stop us!” The guests clapped, it was not every day that the Pierce Clan had a Nirto. An hour before then, when the party had just started two people, one man, and one woman enter the palace for the party. They were not of the Pierce Clan but all the same the man with the beard knew who they were. Even now as guests were applauding the man and the woman, dressed like everyone else stood at the back of the crowd. The man had white hair, but was not old. His bangs were long, they covered his right eye. The woman seemed younger but she had an aura of happiness around her. The woman had long red hair, tied in a long ponytail. No guest questioned their presence despite the fact they were not part of the Pierces.
“How long do we have to stay here Kio?” the woman whispered to the man.
“As long as it takes!” the man snapped back.
“But I’m BOOOORRRRREEEEDDDD” the woman whined. The man glared at her. “Can’t we go do something else?” The man hit the woman over the head. “No we can’t were here to stop the massacre.” The man sighed. A couple of days earlier Derjuro City was destroyed, all thief’s even the master of the class, the Thief King had all been killed. Even before then the trees of Esuom had been burned to the ground, every magician wiped out and so was their leader, Giro the Light. The only places left were the dark marsh of Pusero were the powerful warriors resided and the Kingdom of Hersities which is were the classy bowmen lived. The man with the white beard was known as Wortile, king of all bowmen. The woman beside him was the queen, Ariena. They had their very first baby daughter named Athenia Pierce. Athenia was a Nirto, a master of the class, in this case bowmen. A Nirto is born every 30 years in case the time comes when an evil too great needs to be defeated. The Nitro has a Hoin mark on their left hand. The mark is a circle with a triangle in the middle. Nitros can analyze any ability of their own class and use it for their own.
“Let us bless our new born daughter with the power and grace of our customs!” Wortile urged. The guests all applauded. Ariena held up her daughter, the guests held up their left hands. Suddenly beams of light erupted from the guests’ hands and flew into the now cry baby girl. Then Wortile begun to raise his, to bad it wouldn’t make it. “SMASH” broken glass flew down from the ceiling. A window by the third level balcony had been broken; a shape flew through the air, the shape of a man. The man somersaulted in the air, landing perfectly on his feet at the bottom of the carpeted star case. Everything was still; the man took out a gun and pointed it at Wortile. A gunshot sounded through the air, the sound of death. Wortile fell back wards a bullet hole in his chest. Ariena seeing the danger ran with her baby in her arms. All the guests pulled bright golden bows and crossbows. They simultaneously pulled their strings back, “FIRE” one of the guests roared! Arrows and bolts alike flew through the air, the golden projectiles blending in with the similarly coloured walls and pillars. The man turned, he had coal black hair and even darker eyes. He had a blood red cape, and red shoes. Attached to his belt has a katana in sheath. The man took out the katana, it glowed a dark blue. The man held his sword above his head, the blue calm light turned a harsh black. The man ran straight for the arrows, his hand becoming a wild blur.

The sound of metal clashing metal sounding the room. The sound of the arrows hitting the man’s armor? Or the sound of the man’s sword hitting the arrows? The man charged at the archers, his sword deflecting each and every arrow. The man was too close for the archers to shoot at, sitting ducks. The man slashed in a full circle around him, majority of the guests around him, men and women were sent flying backward. Their bodies smashed against the walls. The walls no longer golden but blood red. The remaining guests were far enough to start firing again. Each of them produced a golden bow with golden feathers attached. The bow glowed a holy yellow aura. Millions of blazing sharp yellow arrows flew through the air; they too glowed with the same yellow aura of the bow that they were being fired from.




The man jumped into the air, he grabbed his gun. Six blood curling gun shots sounded through the air, followed by the “Thump” of six bodies hitting the floor. One guest was left, terrified he ran for his life. The man hit the ground, pulled out a gun aimed it directly for the guest. One last gun shot sounded. A gun smoked, but not the man’s. The women with Kio had fired her own pistol and had shot the man’s gun right out of his hand. Or to be exact, hit his hand, causing him to drop it. Kio charged at the man, getting his first glance of him. The man had black fingerless gloves, cold black armor with pale white trim. His cold black hair was wild, spiking out in nearly every direction. The man jumped backwards, firing with his pistol. Kio became a blur and in front of the man within milliseconds. Kio smirked “This is going to be an easy job after all” he thought. His fist, in a black knuckle basher went up heading squarely for the man’s chin. The man stepped backward, completely dodging Kio’s attack. He slashed with his katana downward. Half way through the slash the man changed his trajectory it completely missed Kio, but hit the bullet from the woman. The bullet ricocheted off the katana. The bullet flew down wards and skinned Kio’s cheek. Kio did a sweep kick, trying to knock the man off guard. At the last second the man jumped into the air and pointed another gun at Kio, another gunshot filled the room. Kio rolled out of the way of the bullet and jumped to his feet. The man landed on the ground and readied his katana. Six consecutive guns shots sounded through the air. The man spun his sword in front of him in a large circle, blocking each and every bullet coming towards him. Kio jumped into the air, his eyes flared a dark blue. His clothes changed into what seemed a blue jumpsuit, flaring with blue embers, his hair turned the same color of blue as the rest of him and it grew longer and spiked backward. He jumped into the air and his hands glowed an even darker blue. He pointed his hands at the man and millions of blue little orbs flew at the man. The man ran out of the way of the blue orbs and fired a round of bullets at Kio. The bullets hit him but just turned to smoke as they hit Kio. Kio turned and fired more blue orbs. The man didn’t have time to dodge this around. The blue orbs hit their target, exploding sending smoke all over the area.

“Hime! Run!” The woman didn’t know what Kio meant. Suddenly she felt very dizzy. Her eyes rolled backward. She re focused her eyes. What was this strange numbness? She thought he could hear Kio screaming. Why? She looked downward there was the man katana, stabbed through her back and out the other side. She fell to the ground. The man, behind the body pulled out the katana, now caked in Hime’s blood. Hime’s body began to glow. Suddenly pieces of her turned into yellow shining dust. They rose into the air and made a floating orb glowing the same colour as the dust. The orb flew at Kio. Kio held out his arms, as if welcoming it. The orb went inside of Kio, his body began to glow a goldish yellow. Kio closed his eyes, it must have been raining, and there were clear water drops on his face.

PAIN
DETERMINATION
STRENGTH
Fear…
Darkness…
Void…

Kio’s body began to glow a dark black, all of the before blue parts, now glowed a cold black. He jumped into the air. Millions of black orbs flew from Kio’s hands, these were 5 times as big as the before blue ones. When he landed on the ground he smashed his fist into the ground. Millions of black spikes traveled through the ground, following the orbs to the man who had killed Kio’s only partner. The only person he cared about, the only person who understood. One orb hit it’s target, stunning him. Then the millions of spikes impaled the man. Kio grabbed the man’s sword and ran at the man. He couldn’t move! His hand was incased in ice! The sword’s hilt was freezing, the ice began to creep up Kio’s arm, now at his elbow.

“Only I can use that weapon,” the man said. “It’s impossible to escape” The man slid his hands and legs out of the black spikes. He threw a bomb to Kio’s feet. The timer had two minutes on it. The man then left. Kio dropped the sword but it was too late to stop the ice. The ice now a couple of inches past his elbow. “Damn it!” Kio thought

1 Minute 30 seconds

He was panicking, it was a test of sanity.

1 Minute

His heart pounded, there was no rhythm just the “THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP”

30 Seconds

There was one way to escape. But it was insane, not like there’s a choice.

10 Seconds

Kio took out a dagger and cut his arm off. Pain seared through his body.

5 Seconds

He ran straight for the door.

4

Half-way there

3

8The pain made it hard to concentrate. His body was going insane. How much blood had he lost?

2

His movements were jerky the loss of his right arm made him unbalanced.

1

0

The hall exploded! Pieces of the walls and ceiling flew through the air. The marvelous gold colour now charred from the explosion. The man’s katana flew through the air, it’s silver blade could be seen, reflecting the light of the moon.

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Pepsi » Mon Jan 12, 2009 11:41 am

Yay it is back

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Zaylo » Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:35 pm

3 is coming soon

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:33 am

cool!

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by zhulov3rz » Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:23 am

ouch...

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Zaylo » Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:36 pm

meh thats what you get for no security

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Pepsi » Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:36 pm

What are you talking about what security o.0

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:00 pm

huh? wtf? did something happen between you two?

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Pepsi » Wed Jan 14, 2009 11:34 am

Between who and who!?

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by sfdude13 » Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:55 pm

Wait is this even remotely related to Final Dawn?

I still want to know when the next one of those could ever be because as soon as my character gets introduced, you ran out of ideas or just got lazy XD

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:59 am

zhulover why did you say ouch, and zaylo why did you say thats what you get for no security?

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Gillian » Thu Jan 15, 2009 6:16 am

Very exiting, the action doesnot go away so you keep on reading

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Pepsi » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:31 am

Zaylo how many chapters do you think it will have?

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:59 pm

XD this is a good story, but what hapened to the other one, like the dark hero or w/e

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Pepsi » Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:19 pm

I liked the GM for day one (F2)

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:58 pm

lol my friend wrote that, i could ask him to write another chapter if you want.

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Pepsi » Fri Jan 16, 2009 7:18 am

Yesh please

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:45 pm

lol, i told him and he was all like, OMG! XD! LOL! (cool)

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by Cloggy » Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:19 am

hmm, this is quite interresting. :]

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 1

Post by jonlin » Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:15 pm

hmm indeed hmm

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