Sucked in! Chapter Two
Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:27 am
Sucked In! chapter two. I think I will divide the chapters into some with the main characters, and one to help the storyline along.
Last Chapter:
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=1667
Jonathon's POV
I already felt more powerful. I had been training on these mushroom's for a few hours, charging any one I saw. This was when I realized that If this was like maplestory, I should be able to check my level. So I looked around at my clothes and noticed that my watch had gotten a new button. I pressed this button and all of a sudden, a screen popped up in front of me! I looked at it carefully. It had a picture of me, then beside it my level and fame and guild:
My 'Level': 23
Fame: 0
Guild: ---
Oh man, I have been training since I got here but I still don't know anyone, how I am here, how to get back, what to do, where to go, or anything like that! I figured I would look for an old man to ask some questions, and yes I know that's a stereotype, but Hey, It's a game! This is when I look up and realize i chased the monsters a bit too far... I don't recognize where I am!
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Drake's POV
"PHEW!" I exclaimed as I sat down on this weird chair I got from some plumber guy. This killing stuff was hard work! I looked up and suddenly was filled with dread. I was surrounded by a bunch of mountains I didn't know, A mist was slowly thickening, and weird looking monsters were appearing as silhouettes in the mist, one by one. I slowly turned around a few times and scouted out the weakest monsters. There was a group of snails on my left, and a few mushrooms at my back right, But the rest of the monster silhouette's looked really tough. I decided it would only get worse with time and that is when HE stepped out. He had short black hair that blew easily with the wind, and appeared to be holding a sword that looked like it WANTED to be huge, like some oversized skyscraper, but was being compressed into a thin blade by this man's power. He stepped out of the mist and it all suddenly dissolved. I stepped back in the sudden shock, there must have been MILLIONS of monster's around me. I think at least 99 thousand of every monster must have been there. The man walking towards me calmly emitted almost a pressure, I felt like I couldn't move. I saw his lips starting to move, and focused my senses to hear him.
"-come with me, Drake. Let me research you. I promise, you won't be in TOO much pain..." then he started to laugh, an overpowering sound that brought me to my knees. I was starting to despair. He walked closer, closer, closer...."
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Caelin's POV.
"It worked!" exclaimed a researcher.
I sighed.... all the other researcher had their experiment's working.... why couldn't my bio-data experiment work?
"It's ok Caelin." said my friend Justin. " I'm sure it'll work sometime... you just overshot yourself."
That's what everyone says. 'you overshot yourself' or 'maybe next time' why can't my experiments just WORK! It should work. I mean, come on, creating a minature bio-matter world and transporting data from a computer into a bio-matter body with a duplicate of the computer owner's soul shouldn't be THAT impossible... right?
Hope you liked it! well R&R I guess =p (rate and review)
Last Chapter:
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=1667
Jonathon's POV
I already felt more powerful. I had been training on these mushroom's for a few hours, charging any one I saw. This was when I realized that If this was like maplestory, I should be able to check my level. So I looked around at my clothes and noticed that my watch had gotten a new button. I pressed this button and all of a sudden, a screen popped up in front of me! I looked at it carefully. It had a picture of me, then beside it my level and fame and guild:
My 'Level': 23
Fame: 0
Guild: ---
Oh man, I have been training since I got here but I still don't know anyone, how I am here, how to get back, what to do, where to go, or anything like that! I figured I would look for an old man to ask some questions, and yes I know that's a stereotype, but Hey, It's a game! This is when I look up and realize i chased the monsters a bit too far... I don't recognize where I am!
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Drake's POV
"PHEW!" I exclaimed as I sat down on this weird chair I got from some plumber guy. This killing stuff was hard work! I looked up and suddenly was filled with dread. I was surrounded by a bunch of mountains I didn't know, A mist was slowly thickening, and weird looking monsters were appearing as silhouettes in the mist, one by one. I slowly turned around a few times and scouted out the weakest monsters. There was a group of snails on my left, and a few mushrooms at my back right, But the rest of the monster silhouette's looked really tough. I decided it would only get worse with time and that is when HE stepped out. He had short black hair that blew easily with the wind, and appeared to be holding a sword that looked like it WANTED to be huge, like some oversized skyscraper, but was being compressed into a thin blade by this man's power. He stepped out of the mist and it all suddenly dissolved. I stepped back in the sudden shock, there must have been MILLIONS of monster's around me. I think at least 99 thousand of every monster must have been there. The man walking towards me calmly emitted almost a pressure, I felt like I couldn't move. I saw his lips starting to move, and focused my senses to hear him.
"-come with me, Drake. Let me research you. I promise, you won't be in TOO much pain..." then he started to laugh, an overpowering sound that brought me to my knees. I was starting to despair. He walked closer, closer, closer...."
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Caelin's POV.
"It worked!" exclaimed a researcher.
I sighed.... all the other researcher had their experiment's working.... why couldn't my bio-data experiment work?
"It's ok Caelin." said my friend Justin. " I'm sure it'll work sometime... you just overshot yourself."
That's what everyone says. 'you overshot yourself' or 'maybe next time' why can't my experiments just WORK! It should work. I mean, come on, creating a minature bio-matter world and transporting data from a computer into a bio-matter body with a duplicate of the computer owner's soul shouldn't be THAT impossible... right?
Hope you liked it! well R&R I guess =p (rate and review)