ITS LEOWU!!! MUAHHAHAHAH

[LeoWu]

I decieded to drop this
"Maple Halo" Cuase it was too boring,
I had no fun at all writing it. It
will be canceled. Thank you for your time.
I will be starting a new one so Get exited.
:)

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By the way do you think i'm negitive or positive?
Just asking.

[jonlin]

how come you never finish your fanfics? 0.o

[stng75]

I never read it anyway XD

[LeoWu]

how come you never finish your fanfics? 0.o

Yes, i never do.
I get bored and i quit.
I'm a quitter, And because of that, success will never come
my way. I got mine way. You got yours.
I shall walk my way And i will not care
If its the way of death. Dont reply to this.
I hope you understand what i mean

I never read it anyway XD

Yea i know you never probally did.
and we all know why you would say
this.

Belive me Too bad you havent read mine yet.
My would own yours if this was a compitition.
No offence.

"XD"

and no, i'm not emo. Lol

Stng I understand you dont like me as
much because my honest answers
wasnt what you have expected.
But please If you havent read it,
weather if you think i'm not that good
then why bother posting?
Trying to get me mad,trying to
insult me, get me embarresed,
or trying to make me look bad.
None of the affect me So please.
If you got nothing nice to say, Dont bother
posting in my topics.
And stop acting like an a-hole.

~Leo

[stng75]

Nope u got it all wrong
I was going to but when I saw the halo part and I thought it was a cheap knock off of halo

[LeoWu]

Nope u got it all wrong
I was going to but when I saw the halo part and I thought it was a cheap knock off of halo

uhh, do you know how to count?
I got more than maple halo.
and yes
most of my fan fics right now sucks
cuase i make them randomly and i rush
them. Overall rateing of me is like a 3 or 4 out of 10.

[futurestart]

Nope u got it all wrong
I was going to but when I saw the halo part and I thought it was a cheap knock off of halo

uhh, do you know how to count?
I got more than maple halo.
and yes
most of my fan fics right now sucks
cuase i make them randomly and i rush
them. Overall rateing of me is like a 3 or 4 out of 10.

ohhhh wow leo
you should compare your self with the time
when you were still writing that
clan story It was really good
but you were so unmature
my friend, you have matured in
a scary way. are you like goth?
if you not emo...

[stng75]

He's not emo
And unmature isn't even a word

[Zaylo]

Nope u got it all wrong
I was going to but when I saw the halo part and I thought it was a cheap knock off of halo

uhh, do you know how to count?
I got more than maple halo.
and yes
most of my fan fics right now sucks
cuase i make them randomly and i rush
them. Overall rateing of me is like a 3 or 4 out of 10.

ohhhh wow leo
you should compare your self with the time
when you were still writing that
clan story It was really good
but you were so unmature
my friend, you have matured in
a scary way. are you like goth?
if you not emo...

Ya you see he went through puberty, dont worry it will happen to you eventually as well.

OT:
Seriously I considered (and still do) Leo my rival, in both read and writing fanfics. However neither of us have written lately.

[synn90210]

hmm well im not getting involved O.o anyhow i think ur a great writer i just dont like ur style so much...i...idk why im just not a huge fan. again ur a great writer (much better than me) so keep on writing

[chobbilight]

leowu i got 1 thing 2 say 2 you and thats you you you %$#$&#@$%*$% why did you stop maple halo omg i was waiting for like 1 month 2 read the next paragraph....and i got a anotther thing 2 say stng's story was good and its not rlly like pokemon and i got something else 2 say 2 you and that is can i be in your next fanfic......and omg my post are making sence (a little bit)

[futurestart]

Its an urban word.

www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Unmature

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[LeoWu]

...
Rivalry...
is that suppose to be a complement?

and i'm sorry chobi..
And yea you can be in my next fan fiction.
Good or evil?
poor or rich?
tell me waht you want and need.

BY the way synn
Like i'm not being mean or
i'm not tryign to diss you at all
but i dont really like your stye either..
Like seriously
I'm not insulting or anything at all.
Honest...

When i write something it would be like this.


He opened his eyes as the bright rays of
the sun shined into his brown eyes,
he lowered his head a bit as then
adjusted his eyes up. The face
of his mother came upon his
eyes. Her blue eyes stared right
into his with such warmness
as the colour of her blond hair.
She screamed as everything
went black.

When you would right it like this

I opened my eyes as the bright
rays of the sun shined into my
brown eyes, I lowered my head
a bit, then adjusted my eyes upward.
my mothers face came upon my
sight. He blue eyes looked at me
with such warmness like the
colour of her blond hair.
I heard the pitch scream of
my mother and everything went
black.


That would how you would write it.

We have not only that style but we have differant ways
of writing. My own writing style is
much differant than yours. It gives continuious
actions of the character and more discription of the back
ground with barely any analizing. Thats why i use "as" alot
if you have ever read my storys. Thats my own signature
way of writing.
When yours would be Short parts of actions and
giving what the character see and feel.
Sight.
little discription yet lots of analizing.
We are differnant is many ways but
yet unique in our own writing style.

But what i do like about your style is that
there are many ways of writing things
that i cant write in my style like.
Example:

I laied there.
Motionless.
under that one tree.
as thoughts kept
coming and going
throughout my head.
I gripped my fist and slammed it
on the grass.
"DAM YOU JOHN"
I shouted.
as I knew in my way In my road,
In the story of my life that there
is a corner deep in everyone's heart.
a little corner saved only for a very special
person. And to me John, you were that person...
You gave me happiness,happiness that could
never be granted and yet i feel it just by thinking
of you. You brought me wonder, You brought me light,
and yet Many pages of my life has been written on yours.
and yet your gone now...
Tears came down my cheeks.
John, You make me think, You make me wonder,
so hard, Why my corner, in my heart.
Was saved...
just for you.

now that is something I cant write in my style of writing
and I really like to write like that but somehow I cant...
well i could but it wouldnt be as good or sound as good
or be as good to read. so yea. :)
Anyways i hope you understand what I mean.

Thanks for you time
i know it was a long post.
Hope you improve in writing.

[jonlin]

by the way leo, I have been wondering about this for a while, but why do your posts go down after about 5 or 6 words, for example this sentence would be:


by the way leo,
I have been wondering
about this for a while,
but why do your posts
go down after about
5 or 6 words, for example
this sentence would be:



so basically that post could have taken a LOT less space if you wrote like this.
your style is in third person and his is first person style btw.

[LeoWu]

I know third narrator and first narrator i think. I'm sorry about making the paragraphs little.
Making it little helps me think better and think more.
Its just me.

[synn90210]

i totally understand what u mean and i respect ur opinion leo. again ur an amazing writer (once again much better than me).

[carousiex]

LOL LOL LOL LOL althought it was a great story

[LeoWu]

Whats with the "LOL LOL LOL"