A Noob's Life - CH 12!!!
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 2:00 am
A Noob's Life 12
Sry It's short, I also tried a new type of writing in first half, R&R (Rate and Review)
I saw it coming. Bunching my muscles as quickly as possible and pushing with all my might, I flash jumped and barely got away. I cautiously brought my claw up in front of me, ready at any moment. I threw an ilbi and jumped back as fast as possible. Just as I jumped back, the air around where I just was crackled with energy and I felt an energy shock from 10 feet away. I studied the man who called himself Kvothe in front of me. He had hair the colour of a starless night down to his shoulders and eyes that were lightning blue. He was average height and very well built. I noticed him starting to talk under his breath, jumped past him and threw two stars while in midair. His hand swept toward me and knocked the knives right back at me, crackling with energy. I used the force of the jump to roll me away and the knives struck the ground two inches away from my head. I cautiously started to get up and jumped to my left as fast as possible. A bolt of blue light sped past me and singed my black metrosexual hair, making it a little bit shorter in the back. My eyes narrowed and all of a sudden I noticed how the lightning he had shot had curved around me in a giant circle like a lasso and was now closing in, fast. I jumped straight up, hoping for the best. Then Kvothe smiled cruelly and brought both hands towards me. The lightning below me started to shoot straight up and I closed my eyes, glad I had a nice life.
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Connor saw this guy with black metrosexual hair and blue eyes barely dodging some attacks and ran back to get his friends. They cam as fast as possible and pushed their way through the crowd. Ray saw the man jump straight up and realised what would happen, then started dashing towards the center of the arena, his body glowing red. He took off and tackled the guy with black metrosexual hair out of the way just as the lightning made a pillar where he was a milisecond ago. He floated down gently, still glowing red and then put the disbelieving man he had just saved down. The mage got very angry and started to float. He put his hands out and shot a bolt of ice at both Ray and the stranger. All of a sudden two glowing red figures appeared and knocked the bolts aside, one with a sword and one with a hammer. A glowing red circle appeared around the mage and arrows started flying out at light speed. The arrows were blunted and the mage was knocked back and forth by this barrage until it let up and the mage dissolved into shards of ice.
*Clap* *Clap* “Well DONE! For first time users, of course.” Everyone turned to see the mysterious mage walking towards us calmly.
Sry It's short, I also tried a new type of writing in first half, R&R (Rate and Review)
I saw it coming. Bunching my muscles as quickly as possible and pushing with all my might, I flash jumped and barely got away. I cautiously brought my claw up in front of me, ready at any moment. I threw an ilbi and jumped back as fast as possible. Just as I jumped back, the air around where I just was crackled with energy and I felt an energy shock from 10 feet away. I studied the man who called himself Kvothe in front of me. He had hair the colour of a starless night down to his shoulders and eyes that were lightning blue. He was average height and very well built. I noticed him starting to talk under his breath, jumped past him and threw two stars while in midair. His hand swept toward me and knocked the knives right back at me, crackling with energy. I used the force of the jump to roll me away and the knives struck the ground two inches away from my head. I cautiously started to get up and jumped to my left as fast as possible. A bolt of blue light sped past me and singed my black metrosexual hair, making it a little bit shorter in the back. My eyes narrowed and all of a sudden I noticed how the lightning he had shot had curved around me in a giant circle like a lasso and was now closing in, fast. I jumped straight up, hoping for the best. Then Kvothe smiled cruelly and brought both hands towards me. The lightning below me started to shoot straight up and I closed my eyes, glad I had a nice life.
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Connor saw this guy with black metrosexual hair and blue eyes barely dodging some attacks and ran back to get his friends. They cam as fast as possible and pushed their way through the crowd. Ray saw the man jump straight up and realised what would happen, then started dashing towards the center of the arena, his body glowing red. He took off and tackled the guy with black metrosexual hair out of the way just as the lightning made a pillar where he was a milisecond ago. He floated down gently, still glowing red and then put the disbelieving man he had just saved down. The mage got very angry and started to float. He put his hands out and shot a bolt of ice at both Ray and the stranger. All of a sudden two glowing red figures appeared and knocked the bolts aside, one with a sword and one with a hammer. A glowing red circle appeared around the mage and arrows started flying out at light speed. The arrows were blunted and the mage was knocked back and forth by this barrage until it let up and the mage dissolved into shards of ice.
*Clap* *Clap* “Well DONE! For first time users, of course.” Everyone turned to see the mysterious mage walking towards us calmly.
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