A Noob's Life - CH 12!!!

[jonlin]

A Noob's Life 12
Sry It's short, I also tried a new type of writing in first half, R&R (Rate and Review)


I saw it coming. Bunching my muscles as quickly as possible and pushing with all my might, I flash jumped and barely got away. I cautiously brought my claw up in front of me, ready at any moment. I threw an ilbi and jumped back as fast as possible. Just as I jumped back, the air around where I just was crackled with energy and I felt an energy shock from 10 feet away. I studied the man who called himself Kvothe in front of me. He had hair the colour of a starless night down to his shoulders and eyes that were lightning blue. He was average height and very well built. I noticed him starting to talk under his breath, jumped past him and threw two stars while in midair. His hand swept toward me and knocked the knives right back at me, crackling with energy. I used the force of the jump to roll me away and the knives struck the ground two inches away from my head. I cautiously started to get up and jumped to my left as fast as possible. A bolt of blue light sped past me and singed my black metrosexual hair, making it a little bit shorter in the back. My eyes narrowed and all of a sudden I noticed how the lightning he had shot had curved around me in a giant circle like a lasso and was now closing in, fast. I jumped straight up, hoping for the best. Then Kvothe smiled cruelly and brought both hands towards me. The lightning below me started to shoot straight up and I closed my eyes, glad I had a nice life.

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Connor saw this guy with black metrosexual hair and blue eyes barely dodging some attacks and ran back to get his friends. They cam as fast as possible and pushed their way through the crowd. Ray saw the man jump straight up and realised what would happen, then started dashing towards the center of the arena, his body glowing red. He took off and tackled the guy with black metrosexual hair out of the way just as the lightning made a pillar where he was a milisecond ago. He floated down gently, still glowing red and then put the disbelieving man he had just saved down. The mage got very angry and started to float. He put his hands out and shot a bolt of ice at both Ray and the stranger. All of a sudden two glowing red figures appeared and knocked the bolts aside, one with a sword and one with a hammer. A glowing red circle appeared around the mage and arrows started flying out at light speed. The arrows were blunted and the mage was knocked back and forth by this barrage until it let up and the mage dissolved into shards of ice.

*Clap* *Clap* “Well DONE! For first time users, of course.” Everyone turned to see the mysterious mage walking towards us calmly.

[chobbilight]

werent you first a pally....but its good thought

[jonlin]

the first bit is just a guy named billy. If you notice, I am actually the glowing red guy with a mace who knocked an ice bolt aside

[chobbilight]

ow....dam didn't c that coming

[synn90210]

gasp! am i the mage ?

[zenopop]

interesting but SHORT

[1LastBreath]

that was short but awe some ~~~~

[Duality]

you are getting better!

[jonlin]

thanks ROCKSTAR! :D I remember you gave me motivation to write on the old site too because you liked it ^^

[Duality]

Its was my fav but now evertbody is copying u and having their chars start new and dont know where they are and stuff butt still i like it, also, am iin this one?or later?

[jonlin]

hmm you wanted to be chase right? maybe....

[Duality]

Yeahhh, i probly be like a god, the person who never maxed his skills and is a role model, me , the beginner

[jonlin]

I think I made you the evil boss... did I?

[Duality]

In the originalthing but this is a different person ,a rebel, never got a job, just been killin MONSTERS never got a card, never even went to the tents

[chobbilight]

I think I made you the evil boss... did I?

wasn't i the evil boss?

[jonlin]

I forget >.< sryyyyyyyyy...... >.<

[chobbilight]

every1 makes mistakes

[jonlin]

wait no your not the evil guy 0.o chase is. (antinexon)

[chobbilight]

who the hell am i then?

[jonlin]

I forget and what was your name you applied with?