rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

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rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

Post by zhulov3rz » Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:25 pm

i gonna show off my sh*tty writin skills by writing out my animated movie "Maple Chronicles"
lol s**ty title

y? coz im bored!
(exellent)
for the actual vid, go to my blog
few warnings
1337talk although originaly in the story will be kept to its minimal... (F6)
original coarse language will be removed (eek)
note that also some content is based on actual ms
ignore all content in <> for a proper read

so prepare to get |-|@x0r3d
crappy? no worries sonner or later will be discontinued for crappyness
*this line has been removed by gilly (lol)*

its CNY (chinese new year lol)
Chapter 1 (more like intro though)

This is the story of Maple when it wass filled with hackers<---- wait.... correction>
This is the story of Maple when it was filled with hackers and thieves. why? Dits were cool because the show off with savage. i mean who could resist doing six numbers in damage on a single monster. Sins rocks because its free hp and the coolness of springing around just made it more addictive.

Corrupt thieves made gangs<-----call it guilds if you want------> so more theives joined and learned. other beginners wowed at the noize these bandits make. Sins ks so nubs in hope of getting a chance to ks back they choose 'rogue'
Not all thieves were bad but because the hacking situation became serious gms were typing

Code: Select all

!banall
to bann all ppl in a map.

All thieves started fleeing and running and then territorial conquest broke out due to the fact that theives were undermining every single piece of ground that was there to hide.

Of the most successful was the gang known as 'the Ma$t3r$'<-----lol 1337talk------>. They used to kill people and rob money but no longer, instead they decided to help people now.They were called masters because they were among the strongest. So they striked every single dungeon that they knew existed and took over most of victoria.

when more GMs were recruited a misconception broke out between the masters and the gm so some of the strongest were banned forever. This was when everything started happening... Fiends of the masters truck when the iron was hot and took out another 90% of them.

The remaining 10% were 3 people two parents and their son. They were taking him to the base where it all started. the parents were scratiching their heads trying to remember how to open the door.

The child was staring at the plants around him, his name XxDeaDlySinzZ
look, i take no responsibility for names that actually resemble maple characters becos names were ficticously used

Suddenly, the notorious DeathAng3l, leader of the rival gang DarkDeathz appeared. 70 icicles were zooming towards them and they cant stop it....

TO BE CONTINUED
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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!

Post by LeoWu » Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:28 pm

Umm Is this Suppose to be a story? if it is then.... koff koff no comment . Your umm, skills, umm... koff koff no comment

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!

Post by zhulov3rz » Sat Jan 24, 2009 11:50 pm

LeoWu wrote:Umm Is this Suppose to be a story? if it is then.... koff koff no comment . Your umm, skills, umm... koff koff no comment

i know....
i accidentally pressed submit so plz come again....

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!

Post by Zaylo » Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:27 am

LeoWu wrote:Umm Is this Suppose to be a story? if it is then.... koff koff no comment . Your umm, skills, umm... koff koff no comment

no offence but hes better then you

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!

Post by zhulov3rz » Mon Jan 26, 2009 9:33 am

Zaylo wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Umm Is this Suppose to be a story? if it is then.... koff koff no comment . Your umm, skills, umm... koff koff no comment

no offence but hes better then you

realli???

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

Post by Zaylo » Mon Jan 26, 2009 6:38 pm

yes for the fact you know how to indent paragraphs

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

Post by LeoWu » Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:20 am

xD its ok Zaylo Just Clam Down I know Your mad :D (F2)

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

Post by LeoWu » Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:21 am

Zaylo Why Are You Mad at me? (F6) Is it because i said my story was 2nd in fan fic?..... well that couldnt be it that would be stupid to be mad at me for that (F6) Mind If you Tell me at least?

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

Post by Zaylo » Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:20 pm

becuase my friend you breaking rules over and over again with remorse!

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:07 am

... :D

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Re: rewrite of my movie serise (part 0.5 here folks!)

Post by jonlin » Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:32 pm

uuummm leowu i am pretty sure you don't respond to that kinda thing...

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