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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her (1 viewing) (1) Guest
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Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/11 06:44
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Final DAWN No Place For HErOs
The boy walked into his apartment building. He closed the door behind him. He reached into a cabinet and grabbed a cup of instant noodles and threw them into the microwave. He put them in for thirty seconds and walked over to the sink. In the sink were some clean dishes and some forks and knifes. He picked up a fork and took his noodles and began eating them. A knock came on the door. A voice sounded from outside. “Hey Cavas Lets us In Looks Like There’s Going To Be a Raid.”
The boy opened the door. Two people stood there. A girl around the age of 13, and a boy around the age of 15. Cavas smiled “Hey Kitten!”
The girl laughed. The other boy just glared at Cavas. “What’s wrong Demz?” asked Cavas.
“Like I said” Demz began “There’s going to be a raid”
Cavas yawned, “So what they don’t care about civilians like us.”
“Yes but they might check on you two”
The girl was shocked “Why would you say that? Cav and I aren’t anything special”
“ Well you see” Demz said “I was looking at the ruins of the old king: Kratos. “ You know that old legend about the war?”
The girl smiled sheepishly “I forgot”
Cavas sighed, “Kitten” he said with a bit of scolding in his voice.
“Well it doesn’t really matter he said “ But anyways a boy hero and a girl sin had faced off against the evil king Kratos . The boy and the girl used all of their power to stop him… but it wasn’t enough. They destroyed his palace but they’re bodies were never found. The resistance is still carried on today by two boys, Mike and SF.” Demz finished.
Cavas yawned “But its so not true, right Kitten?”
“Actually Cav” the girl said. She reached behind her neck and took of her necklace. On the necklace was a ring with a pink stone.
“Hey I have a necklace just like that!” Cavas said. He took off his necklace it had a ring as well. This one however had a blue stone.
Suddenly a voice sounded out
“Bio-Links Established C.O.N. M.A.Y.M.E.G.A. system online.” The necklaces floated into the sky the pink one pointed up the blue one pointed down. The stone glowed their respective colours. The blue one changed shape, into a blue katana. The pink one transformed into a purple dragon sleeve claw. The blade attached its self to Cavas’ back, ready to brought out into a battle. Weres the claw attached to the girl’s hand. The room became white, everything but The girl and Cavas turned white, Demz was gone. There was a man standing about 100 feet away from them.
The Man had long black Tristan hair, and had black shades covering his eyes.
“Wasup Dudes!” The man said.
“Amy I don’t think were at my apartment anymore.” Said Cavas. He got up to his feet and helped Amy up as well.
“Well if this isn’t nostalgic” the man said. “You remind me of two people I used to know.”
“Who are you?” Amy asked
“I could ask you the same thing!” The man said. He took a pistol out of his pocket, and fired it at Amy.
Hope You all Liked It :DDD
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/13 11:21
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o_o Wth is this? Origins?
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/08/13 11:38
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Opps
I forgot to say that (sweatdrop)
This is the first chapter of the last part of Final Dawn it takes place 10 years after dark hero
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/08/14 06:44
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:P
10 years, hmmm...
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/08/18 01:33
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bio link - con may mega? 2 kids with same weps? hmmm wth happenned did con and mays soul go into the kids? wtf?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/08/18 04:57
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Jonlin wrote: bio link - con may mega? 2 kids with same weps? hmmm wth happenned did con and mays soul go into the kids? wtf?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?
Yes this takes place 10 years after the dark hero so you will have to see
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/28 04:33
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DUDE!!! When is the next Dark Hero coming out!?! Im fed up of waiting! You keep staalling!:angry: :angry: :angry:
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/28 04:39
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Lol, patience, rofl. Go read other fanfics while you're at it!
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/28 05:52
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mudgie101 wrote: DUDE!!! When is the next Dark Hero coming out!?! Im fed up of waiting! You keep staalling!:angry: :angry: :angry: yah wat Wh33 said read mine for example
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/28 06:08
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lolz making comercials for ur own comic the competition wont like it
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ima ks you all ouda tha white houze
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/08/28 08:59
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mudgie101 wrote: DUDE!!! When is the next Dark Hero coming out!?! Im fed up of waiting! You keep staalling!:angry: :angry: :angry:
OMG NATHAN!!!!!! ya i know its u i can tell cause of ur name and sword
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/28 19:51
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who is nathan :O wh33 is nathan F5
jkjkjk
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ima ks you all ouda tha white houze
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/30 09:18
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GUYS IM BACK!!!!!
And ehmmm Zaylo can u post back all the chapters of ur fanfic ? cuz i wanna read them i haven read all XD
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/30 21:08
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wb
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ima ks you all ouda tha white houze
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/08/31 10:47
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Ya its me! But youre making the last series in the Final Dawn Series when you havent finished the first one!?!:S
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/09/12 09:17
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lol i dunno either *mudgie* hint hint nudge nudge
btw this is caelin =p
READ MEH FANFIC!
pl0x btw connor really i was rite? yahoo!
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/09/29 22:58
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This is the First fanfic I have read that is actually not as bad as I thought it would be :D, Great Job. Cant wait Till the next part.
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/09/30 02:02
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hey new person actually this is my second 1 read the dark hero series
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Her Posted at 2008/09/30 04:48
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isnt this the last part of like 5 or 6 series and final dawn is serieses names and ur like halfway done the dark hero and YEA REALEASE THE NEXT DARK HERO =p
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/09/30 08:28
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i willl i willl jeez > : (
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/09/30 10:30
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Get on with it, then!
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Re:Final Dawn No Place For Hero 1 Posted at 2008/10/12 09:30
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wwwoooooowwwww. Why haven't you released anything it's been a bajillion days already!:S :S
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